How do I handwrite 小心翼翼 well? My handwriting (of 他小心翼翼地把邮票揭下来):



The 小心翼翼 looks horribly imbalanced: there's two sparse characters 小心 followed by two dense characters 翼翼. I'm wondering what I can do to make it look better.
Question: How do I handwrite 小心翼翼 well?
Note: I'm not asking for generic handwriting tips.  Answers should answer the specific question How do I handwrite 小心翼翼 well?  One possible way of answering this question would be to include your own (properly) handwritten 小心翼翼 and explain how it differs from the one I supplied.
First, you should write hanzi "横平竖直" and "有棱有角".
Second, you can correct the structure of the word "心". Usually, we don't handwrite it like that. 

Third, you can zoom out the word "翼".
Hope these are useful to you.