How do I correct 我几乎在享受中想象着听这样建议的可怜的男人? I'm trying to say this in English:


  I am almost enjoying imagining the poor men who listen to these suggestions, ...


The context is peacocking: Peacocking means dressing for attention; just like peacocks use their feathers to get a mate.  My character is researching these "pick up" techniques online, and she's imagining someone using "peacocking", believing it's a good idea, but look ridiculous in other peoples' eyes.

And this is what I've come up with:


  我几乎在享受中想象着听这样建议的可怜的男人，。。。


I don't think it's very good, though.  I showed my teacher this a while back, but she struggled with it.  I don't think it's an easy sentence.

Question: How do I correct 我几乎在享受中想象着听这样建议的可怜的男人?
我几乎是乐于这种想象：这些可怜的男人们听到这些建议，（会是······）