How to reply to a recruiter ‘thanks for reaching out, I'd like to hear more’? A recruiter wrote me over Linkedin and I'd like to ask for more details, but my Chinese is completely rusty. Linkedin's predefined answer is "您好，感谢与我联系！我希望了解更多信息。". I would like to use another one, if there is any suitable, plus this one sounds a bit too 'canned'.

How about "您好，谢谢你发给我的消息，请你解释一下"？
Perhaps better not to mix up 您 and 你. Stay with one of them.

First part is ok. "您好，谢谢您发给我的消息，

My suggestion for the second part is:

Could you please give me more details?
您是否能够给我更多的详细信息？