is this translation in Chinese of grammatical quality and flow? I am using a 3rd party translation company called Gengo to translate phrases and am trying to measure their ability to translate a phrase in English to Chinese, where flow and native quality are the most important.

Given the sentence:


  Getting information in my own language is more important than the
  price of the product.


Is this translation of high quality in terms of grammar structure?


  透過我自己的語言取得資訊比產品的價格還重要。
Talking about grammar, this version is perfectly fine. The problem is the word choice.

As a native speaker, my translation would be "通过母语获取信息比产品价格更重要".