First pass at copy-editing the RELEASE-NOTES
First pass at copy-editing the RELEASE-NOTES

dragonfax/riak_cs,sdebnath/riak_cs,dragonfax/riak_cs,basho/riak_cs,laurenrother/riak_cs,basho/riak_cs,GabrielNicolasAvellaneda/riak_cs,dragonfax/riak_cs,sdebnath/riak_cs,dragonfax/riak_cs,laurenrother/riak_cs,basho/riak_cs,yangchengjian/riak_cs,laurenrother/riak_cs,GabrielNicolasAvellaneda/riak_cs,yangchengjian/riak_cs,sdebnath/riak_cs,yangchengjian/riak_cs,sdebnath/riak_cs,yangchengjian/riak_cs,GabrielNicolasAvellaneda/riak_cs,laurenrother/riak_cs,basho/riak_cs,GabrielNicolasAvellaneda/riak_cs