RFD 34: copy edits
RFD 34: copy edits

AnthonyMann/rfd,rmustacc/rfd,davepacheco/rfd,davepacheco/rfd,melloc/rfd,joyent/rfd,joyent/rfd,joyent/rfd,melloc/rfd,joyent/rfd,AnthonyMann/rfd,davepacheco/rfd,rmustacc/rfd,melloc/rfd,davepacheco/rfd,davepacheco/rfd