Major edit of report narrative
Major edit of report narrative

Accepted most of the edits in the tickets below; did some larger
rewrites that hopefully address the concerns of the ticket submitters.
If you think I've missed something, feel free to submit again.

Resolves #7, resolves #11, resolves #12, resolves #13, resolves #15,
resolves #19, resolves #20, resolves #21

creativecommons/stateofthe