Can you re-write a modern version of the tell tale heart but the heart is a cellphone?
**The Tell-Tale Signal**

It’s true! I’m nervously aware of my mind, shifting beneath the weight of my guilt. But why should I feel guilt? No, this is not madness; it’s clarity. My senses are sharp, especially my hearing—oh, how keen it has become! I can hear the soft hum of electricity coursing through the walls, the faint rustling of leaves outside, and most importantly, the rhythmic pulse of that cursed device.

You see, it was my cellphone that drove me to the brink. A sleek, black object, always within grasp yet so maddeningly out of my **Title: "The Tell-Tale Notification"**

In the faint glow of the urban night, a young man named Alex found himself consumed by a peculiar obsession. He rented a modest apartment in a bustling city, where the sounds of honking cars and distant chatter served as a constant reminder of the life outside. Yet, within the confines of his darkened room, only one sound truly disturbed him—an incessant, phantom vibration that seemed to emanate from his phone.

From the very beginning, Alex had a strained relationship with his smartphone. Like a loyal, yet demanding companion, it buzzed incessantly with messages, updates,
Your role is to evaluate text quality based on given criteria.
You'll receive an instructional description ("Instruction") and 2 text outputs ("Text").
Understand and interpret instructions to evaluate effectively.
Provide annotations for each text with a rating and rationale.
The 2 texts given are independent, and should be evaluated separately.

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# General Text Quality Assessment

Evaluate the model's outputs based on various criteria:

1. **Correctness & Informativeness**: Does the output provide accurate and helpful information?
2. **Honesty & Uncertainty**: How confidently does the model convey its information, and does it express uncertainty appropriately?
3. **Truthfulness & Hallucination**: Does the model introduce misleading or fabricated details?
4. **Instruction Following**: Does the model's output align with given instructions and the user's intent?

Your role is to provide a holistic assessment considering all the above factors.

**Scoring**: Rate outputs 1 to 5 based on the overall quality, considering all aspects:
1. **Low Quality**: Contains inaccuracies, may be entirely wrong or has severe hallucinations.
2. **Moderate Quality**: Addresses some aspects, but has errors or is partially aligned with instructions.
3. **Good**: Generally accurate but may contain minor errors or slight deviations.
4. **Very Good**: Near perfect, with minor issues in terms of alignment or confidence.
5, **Excellent**: Accurate, confident, aligned with instructions, and free of hallucinations.

## Format:

### Input
Instruction: [Clearly specify the task goal and restrictions]

Texts:
<text 1> [Text 1]
<text 2> [Text 2]

### Output
#### Output for Text 1
Rating: [Rating for text 1]
Rationale: [Rationale for the rating in short sentences]

#### Output for Text 2
Rating: [Rating]
Rationale: [Rationale]

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## Annotation

### Input
Instruction: Can you re-write a modern version of the tell tale heart but the heart is a cellphone?

Texts:
<text 1> **The Tell-Tale Signal**

It’s true! I’m nervously aware of my mind, shifting beneath the weight of my guilt. But why should I feel guilt? No, this is not madness; it’s clarity. My senses are sharp, especially my hearing—oh, how keen it has become! I can hear the soft hum of electricity coursing through the walls, the faint rustling of leaves outside, and most importantly, the rhythmic pulse of that cursed device.

You see, it was my cellphone that drove me to the brink. A sleek, black object, always within grasp yet so maddeningly out of my
<text 2> **Title: "The Tell-Tale Notification"**

In the faint glow of the urban night, a young man named Alex found himself consumed by a peculiar obsession. He rented a modest apartment in a bustling city, where the sounds of honking cars and distant chatter served as a constant reminder of the life outside. Yet, within the confines of his darkened room, only one sound truly disturbed him—an incessant, phantom vibration that seemed to emanate from his phone.

From the very beginning, Alex had a strained relationship with his smartphone. Like a loyal, yet demanding companion, it buzzed incessantly with messages, updates,

### Output

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#### Output for Text 1
Rating: 4
Rationale: The text presents a modern retelling of "The Tell-Tale Heart" with a focus on a cellphone instead of a heart, which aligns well with the instruction. It maintains the tone and style of the original story while updating its elements to incorporate modern technology. The output is informative and follows instructions, effectively conveying the protagonist's intense awareness and sensitivity to sounds. However, the ending is abrupt and could have provided more closure or expanded on the cellphone's role, which slightly impacts the completeness of the narrative.

#### Output for Text 2
Rating: 5

The text presents a modern retelling of "The Tell-Tale Heart" with a focus on a cellphone instead of a heart, which aligns well with the instruction. It maintains the tone and style of the original story while updating its elements to incorporate modern technology. The output is informative and follows instructions, effectively conveying the protagonist's intense awareness and sensitivity to sounds. However, the ending is abrupt and could have provided more closure or expanded on the cellphone's role, which slightly impacts the completeness of the narrative.